After adding lighting to some of the shots, George suggested incorporating more spaceships in the background of my establishing shot. Additionally, he advised me to decide on the details I wanted to include around the establishments. While I have planned everything, I will be adding details like foliage, buildings, and crowds to this shot later on as I continue working on my FMP.
We also decided to consider fading in the portals of the multiverses rather than having them enter the shot from the corners; this change should make the transitions smoother and more visually appealing. For the shot where Dr. Grey is working on his computer, George suggested adding another shot to provide better context and pacing, ensuring the audience fully understands the intensity of the moment.
To make the story clearer, George advised adding more computers around Dr. Grey and showing him frantically trying to stop the glitch, but unfortunately, his efforts are in vain. This addition will help emphasize the desperation and urgency of the situation.
For the final shot, I still need to add some details to make the explosion believable for the previs. This includes adding smoke and a security alarm going off to heighten the sense of urgency. These elements will make the scene more dramatic and engaging for the audience.